Meh. It is kinda good for your first game, but it's really short and doesn't have a bunch of content. The first choice can skip the whole game. Could be better with some more content. In my opinion, the dialogue is fine though.
A Depressed College Student
This is my first game I posted on Itch.io as well as being my first GameJam. This was made in GameMaker Studio 2. All the assets were not made by me. I am always open to constructive criticism, so let me know what you think!
Modern Visual Novel Background: https://konett.itch.io/modern-visual-novel-backgrounds
Female Student: https://liah0227.itch.io/female-student-1
Mom: Ren'py free asset